Sunday, January 20, 2013

Intro to fictional short story exercise

(These are the directions I was given. I'm not sure if this short story is worth pursuing, or if I will, but here is a second draft.)

SETTING EXERCISE

*3. Write a scene in which the character’s mood is at odds with the weather, but make the weather nevertheless express his or her mood--joyful rain, threatening blue skies, chilling summer beach, etc.*

No Title Yet

I knew waiting at the bus stop on a cloudy day was a bad idea, but yet, here I am anyway. As if it is not enough that the clouds rough-housed the sun away, now I have to deal with the wind being the Brainy to my Helga. I sit hunched over with my elbows touching my knees, my hands cradling my chin, and staring down at my feet. All of a sudden, I hear a deafening swoosh and feel the wrath of the wind after it picks up a newspaper and slaps me in the face with it. Here I am thinking the clouds were the bullies, when the wind just practically tried making me participate in a slap-boxing competition I clearly cannot win. Just as I am about to start challenging mother-nature, the bus shows up. I push up the sleeves on my sweater, huff and puff, and stomp on into the bus.
I hand over my identification to the bus-driver, and he tells me that I need two forms of identification to ride this bus.
My shoulders drop along with my jaw, and after a few seconds, I compose myself and say to the bus-driver: “Look, Sir. I was waiting out there for you for a good thirty minutes while the damn wind kicked my ass. And now you want to tell me that I need two forms of identification? Are you kidding me?”
In the most tiresome voice ever, the bus-driver said, “Son, I’m sorry you’re having a bad day, but my job is simply…”
I exclaimed, “…You know what? I’m just going to see my way out because you’re not going to let me ride anyway.” While I stomped back out of the bus, he slightly lifted the right corner of his mouth while shrugging.
This time the clouds were sending down cold daggers of ice at me. I thought to myself, ooo, you mad. Ain't ‘cha, Mother Nature?
(To be continued...maybe. Lol)